Ok, I got rid of some redundant points after some research, changed a few things around, and made the thing easier to read, does everything look to be in order?
Bio: Gamaliel was born third of five children to Duchess (then countess) Dominick, and an adventurer or some renown through matrilineal marriage. The Duchess was seen as a very hands on ruler with very little time not spent on her lands or plotting to acquire neighbouring lands, even her eldest son and eldest daughter were mentored as heirs and warriors by their father, the youngest two given as fosterlings to forge alliances, so it came as some surprise Gamaliel was personally tutored by her.
This, Like every other actions orchestrated by the Duchess, was a grab for more power. Secretly the reason for her success was her practice of the dark arts, Her father, the previous count, and all his heirs were done in by curses mimicking illness, rebels and criminals were carried away into the night by summoned demons, and even many of the barons under her were either cultists or supernaturally controlled.
Gamliel was the most predispositioned to magic, and the only family member savvy to the duchesses secret heresy, he inherited, not only her powers, but her treachery, thus she wisely never taught him any of the darkest spells that would allow him to usurp her. Public (and his own) speculation placed him as heir apparent, and he planned accordingly. His mother was this as plans to overthrow her, and thusly arranged for him to be betrothed to a Caithness baron's daughter in exchange for a magic book, sending him far from where he could do damage.
This infuriated and disgusted Gamliel; why should he have to consort with someone below his station? Why should he have to share a bed, power, a LIFE with someone else? Why produce an heir, why should he die?
Instead, he opted for the only escape he saw, he publically announced he would join the church, if there was only thing his mother could not afford, it was a blow to her apparent piety, so there was no objection. He became a priest in the white magics, hiding his proficiency in the dark arts. This was a path that disqualified him as an heir, but he knew that the church's crackdowns were becoming harsher; to maintain power they needed control, that meant more Bishoprics would be created, holy campaigns would be waged, piety would potentially be a more important factor than lineage, and his station should keep him safe from any inquisitions, or hopefully even allow him opportunities to take part in them, claiming arcane artefacts for himself!
Name: Gamaliel Dominick Gender: Male Point Total: 155 (+5 for bio)
Height: 6’0” Unspent Points: 0
Race: Human (Megalos) Weight: 170 lbs
Size: +0 Hair: Black, Short, Styled
Hand: Right Eyes: Black
Age: 23
Attributes: 69
Advantages: 65
Disadvantages: -50
Quirks: -5
Skills: 11
Spells: 60
Race: 0
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BASIC ATTRIBUTES -------------- SECONDARY CHARACTERISTICS
ST: 10 [+00]--------------------- HP: 10 (10) [+0]
DX: 8 [-40] ----------------------Will: 15 [+0]
IQ: 15 [+100]--------------------Per: 15 [+0]-------------Basic Speed: 4.5 [+0]
HT: 10 [+00]----------------------FP: 13 (13) [+9]-----------Basic Move : 4 [+0]
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CULTURAL FAMILIARITIES
Megalos
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LANGUAGE [free]
Anglish
Spoken
Writen
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REACTION MODIFIERS [+4]
Appearance: Attractive [+4]
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ADVANTAGES AND PERKS [+65]
Magery 3 [+35] B.66
ER +10 [+30]
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DISADVANTAGES [-50]
[-30] Secret: Black Magic, Possible Death B.152
[-10] Obsession: Aquiring Knowledge of Magic B.146
[-5] Vow: chastity B.161
[-5] Selfish B.153
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Quirks [-5]
Optimistic attitude
Dislikes emotional and physical intimacy
Sarcastically condescending when he think no one will notice it
Verbose
Courtly behaviour
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SKILLS [+11]
Skills--------------------------------SL---------RSL-------Pts----Ref
Acting ------------------------------14 --------IQ-1------1------B174
Diplomacy--------------------------13---------IQ-2------1------B187
Geography/TL4 (Political)--------13---------IQ-2------1------B198
Hidden Lore (Demon Lore)-------14---------IQ-1------1------B199
Tactics-----------------------------13----------IQ-2------1------B224
Savoir-Faire (High Society)------15----------IQ+0-----1------B218
Detect Lies-------------------------13---------Per-2-----1------B187
Fast-Talk--------------------------- 14 --------IQ-1------1------B195
Thaumatology----------------------15---------IQ+0------1------B225
Theology (Christianity)------------13---------IQ-2------1------B226
Religious Ritual (Catholic)---------13---------IQ-2------1-----B217
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Spells [+60]
Create Water
Ice Sphere
Purify Water
Seek Water
Shape Water
Imitate Voice
Sound
Voices
Missile Shield
Shield
Identify Plant
Seek Plant
Banish
Death Vision
Steal Energy
Steal Vitality
Summon Demon
Summon Spirit
Zombie
Blackout
Blur
Continual Light
Dark Vision
Darkness
Hide
Invisibility
Light
Night Vision
Images of the Past
Detect Magic
Glass Wall
History
Identify Spell
Seeker
Trace
Simple Illusion
Great Healing
Lend Energy
Lend Vitality
Major Healing
Minor Healing
Recover Energy
Relieve Paralysis
Restoration
Restore Sight
Stop Paralysis
Burning Touch
Create Fire
Explosive Fireball
Fireball
Heat
Ignite Fire
Shape Fire
Mind-Reading
Sense Emotion
Sense Foes
Truthsayer
Itch
Spasm
Strike Blind
Melee Weapons---------------Usage-------Lvl-----Parry------Block----Damage-----------------Reach-----ST
Burning Touch----------------Punch--------8-------9---------------------1d-3 +1d burn/point --------------C
Create Fire-------------------Area----------0-------No-------------------1d-1 burn---------------------------Special
Heavy Cloak---------------------------------0-------No---------0-------------------------------------------------
Magic Staff------------------Swung---------3-------6F--------No--------1d cr---------------------1-----------6
Magic Staff------------------Thrust---------3-------6F--------No--------1d-2 cr------------------1-----------6
Natural-----------------------Kick------------6-------No-------------------1d-2 cr------------------C,1-------------------
Natural-----------------------Kick w/Boots--6 ------No------------------1d-1 cr------------------C,1---------------
Natural-----------------------Punch ----------8-------9---------------------1d-3 cr------------------C----------------
Ranged Weapons------Usage-----Lvl-----------Acc---------Damage------------------Range------RoF-------Shots----Bulk------Rcl-----ST
Explosive Fireball------------------4-------------1-----------1d burn ex/2 points----25/50
Fireball------------------------------4-------------1-----------1d burn/point-----------25/50
Heavy Cloak-----------Thrown----3------------+1------------Special------------------2-------------1-----------T(1)------6----------------8
Ice Sphere--------------------------4-------------2-----------1d cr/point---------------40/80
Equipment (27.502 lb; $890)------------√------------#-----------$---------W----------Ref
Backpack, Small--------------------------E------------1-----------60--------3 lb--------B288
Leather Gloves---------------------------E------------1-----------30--------0 lb--------B284
Magic Staff-------------------------------E------------1-----------40--------1 lb--------B273
Leather Pants----------------------------E------------1-----------40--------3 lb--------B283
Heavy Cloak------------------------------E------------1-----------50--------5 lb--------B287
Leather Helm----------------------------E-------------1----------20--------0.5 lb------B284
Heavy Leather Sleeves-----------------E-------------1----------50--------2 lb---------B283
Leather Armor---------------------------E-------------1---------100-------10 lb--------B283
Reinforced Boots-----------------------E--------------1----------75--------3 lb---------B284
4 pt Powerstone (charge: 4)----------E--------------1----------425-------0.002 lb----M20