Please post your updates throughout the thread, it's much easier to follow.
This is definately my favourite map in development at the moment, you've done a great job. There's a couple of things that still need to be looked at.
The outline of your font is broken with what looks like a 1 pixel dot on most of your vowels. I think it looks nice apart from that. If you're not happy with the black outline, you could try another dark colour. You just need something to add contrast between text and map.
I think your title could benefit from being a bit brighter and maybe even a little bigger.
Lastly, your mountains are fine, but it would be nice to see them improved to look even better. I think you could make them stand out a bit better by having a darker edge to them. This would help individual mountains stand out in a group.