New York State--im giving it a try (latest page 2)

[Coleman]

42 is a rock solid number. I'm guessing the blue is supposed to be river impassible, but if you look most maps list these, I'd recommend you do the same.

Your torn hole/explosion/fallout area is obviously impassible but you may want to list it as well as many current maps would, but I wouldn't force you to.

[Kaplowitz]

Your torn hole/explosion/fallout area

/really ugly mountain thingy

Ill add them on the left

[Kaplowitz]

added what Coleman said.

[Herakilla]

please find a better way to have that mountain! it looks like a cigarette burn

[Kaplowitz]

so...anything on this other than the Mts?

[xxtig12683xx]

also i think the bonus legend is way too big makes the whole map cluttered in my opinion

[Kaplowitz]

also i think the bonus legend is way too big makes the whole map cluttered in my opinion

i was wondering about this...will fix it

[Keredrex]

... Its coming along But ....

1st - Change the fonts on the legend & Title.... Script in my opinion rarely works well for a list of territories and there value ... keep it simple and clean with a easy to read bold font

2nd - the map over all... while its not that bad it looks rough... tha mountains look awful and the borders seem too Thick...

http://geology.com/state-map/new-york.shtml....
check out the map of NYs topography... It shows exactly how the mountain ranges are in the state....
Colors seem too dark Lighten up the territories a little the background is good

Also Mountains don't have to be the only impassable... Forests, Lakes, Highways, Etc. ... Use a combination

[Kaplowitz]

ill play with them